Day 6: Restructuring Act 2 of Come Ups

September 6, 2015


I'm working through the issues I identified yesterday in the second act of Come Ups. Right now the first half of Act 2, is running about 7 pages too long. I've spent a fair amount of time on the first 13 pages, rewriting, restructuring and adding new dialogue and have managed to cut 1 page out. Now I've only got to cut another 6 pages from the remaing 18 pages leading up to the midpoint. Only 6.

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