Day 182: Six Months into the Journey
I’ve reached the halfway point of this yearlong journey, a major milestone. On one hand, I’ve made major progress, but on the other, I...
Day 181: First Feedback
I received my first feedback on the script Come Ups and it seems to be a mixed bag at best. The reader is a close friend and very...
Day 178: The Action Kicks In at Rewrites
I was back at Rewrites Workshop with another 10 pages of Come Ups tonight, and the reader’s desire for action was answered. We read...
Day 174: The Script is Complete. . .For Now
I have finished what I hope to be the last rewrites on the script Come Ups. This is, of course, every screenwriter’s folly. Whenever you...
Day 171: Rewrites Workshop
Day 171: Rewrites Workshop I took another 10 pages of Come Ups into the Rewrites Workshop tonight. The reaction was mostly positive with...
Day 164: Workshop Discussions
Another great read at the Rewrites Writer's Workshop held at the Farmer's Market in Los Angeles. This is a fairly small group of writers...
Day 163: Smoothing Out The Wrinkles
The issues with the top of the second structure seem to have been resolved. Utilizing the press conference as its own scene seems to have...